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Miranda,

Miranda,

I think the article still looks like it has lot of promotional material from the company's website.  Can you try to strip that stuff out and bring out the third party info and references, etc?  [[User:Ray|Ray]]

I think the article still looks like it has lot of promotional material from the company's website.  Can you try to strip that stuff out and bring out the third party info and references, etc?

 

And give us a moment for reference template and company templates, we'll try to create some examples to follow, thx [[User:Ray|Ray]]